Sometimes a script doesn’t need a full overhaul – it needs a focused conversation about one thing that isn’t quite landing. The Story Elements Workshop lets us deep‑dive into a single storytelling pillar drawn from my 7‑element framework.

What do we look at with the story elements workshop?

Short Film
£80.00

You will submit up to 30 pages in industry standard formatting.

You choose one element you’d like to focus on.

What you can expect:

  • 1–2 pages of structured notes for the story element you have selected: character, dialogue, plot, theme, ending, pace, tension.

  • 30 min zoom call to discuss together. Please note, additional zoom time can be purchased at £40 / 30 min.

  • Email follow‑up for any additional questions.

TV Pilot
£120.00

You will submit up to 60 pages in industry standard formatting.

You choose two elements you’d like to focus on.

What you can expect:

  • 3–4 pages of structured notes for each of the seven story elements: character, dialogue, plot, theme, ending, pace, tension.

  • 30 min zoom call to discuss together. Please note, additional zoom time can be purchased at £40 / 30 min.

  • Email follow-up for any additional questions.

Feature Film
£200.00

You will submit up to 140 pages in industry standard formatting.

You choose two elements you’d like to focus on.

What you can expect:

  • 4–5 pages of structured notes for each of the seven story elements: character, dialogue, plot, theme, ending, pace, tension.

  • 45‑min Zoom to discuss together. Please note, additional time can be purchased for £40 / 30 min

  • Email follow-up for any additional questions.

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